Teaser Tuesday: The Story of the First Walker, Part 2
Happy Tuesday, everybody! This is going to be brief–do you know how tiring mentally preparing oneself for a move is?
(Never mind the fact that I haven’t packed a single item, yet!)
For this week’s teaser, I’m posting the second half of my mermaid folktailtale. You can read the first part here.
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I feel like I'm reading a dream… it's so mystical and flows very nicely :]
Thanks, Lia!
Needs more SpagBol!
"SpagBol swam for many SpagBols, following the course of the sun as it rose and set in the sky. At last SpagBol reached the home of the Yellow Staghorn Coral Pod. SpagBol saw how terrible things had become in the year since he had left. Only SpagBol now, grown silver-haired with age, and seven of her lean, starving SpagBols remained."
This reads very much like a folktale. I like it.
Ugh. Your prose absolutely kills me. The detailing is so lovely, it flows beautifully. I can't wait to read more of this.
That is beautiful. And so tragic. Very good.
Aww, thanks guys. And no ugh, Liz. Your prose is pretty terrific, too!
This was such a beautiful read! Completely blown away by the prose and the tease is so interesting.
Brilliant!
That is fucking bubbly.